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    Lol the Forum doesn't recognize "Bieber" as a word. Anyways here is the Prologue(i think it's a prologue?) for my new story! Tell me if i should write it!!!


    "Drew can you come here for a minute?"
    I walked downstairs to find my dad sitting on the couch with a huge glass of cherry coke and a bowl of hot cheetos. He must be about to tell me something i don't want to hear.

    "Drew, Sweetie, I know that you just got out of the hospital but due to certain events that happened with you recently I think it would be a good idea to send you away for the summer. Your 16 now and you need to be careful with the people you deal with. I think you should go stay with your cousin Chaz for the summer, so you can get away from the gangs. I don't want them to hurt you anymore..."

    He was right. I was in a bad situation. I needed to go somewhere I was safe.
    I was still in the gang, they still wanted me, but I didn't know if I still wanted them. I used to be tight with Chaz until all that **** started happening. He left me and I let him, I lost a really good friend. I knew there was no convincing my dad otherwise so I agreed. I just hoped and prayed that THEY wouldn't come after me...


    Whatcha think? Haha, guess they dont recognize Chaz either plz comment!

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    omg, really clever!!! a guy in the story so it isn't a love story which is good! THE ANSWER IS YES, YOU SHOULD KEEP GOING!!!!

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    Ok people. Last time I checked this was viewed 69 times(LOL!). I have chapters written but I gotta know if you like it! Plz comment ASAP!!!!
    "Why it gotta be fat, Justin??
    I perfer the term, sexy suculent
    or pleasently plump. Or thin deprived."

    -BeautifulMelodyxx (I Never Thought)

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    Oh and just thought you guys would like to know, I DREAMT THIS AND WROTE IT DOWN. So if some stuff seems weird it's caus i'm trying to stick it to the dream
    "Why it gotta be fat, Justin??
    I perfer the term, sexy suculent
    or pleasently plump. Or thin deprived."

    -BeautifulMelodyxx (I Never Thought)

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    Though NO ONE but kianna wrote back(thank you) i have decided to write anyway!

    "Ring-Ring!"
    I woke up to my phone ringing. I grabbed it and pressed answer.
    "Hello?"
    "Yeah, this is Taylor Lautner, I was wondering if you wanted to be in the new twilight movie?"
    "Well Chaz, Ryan, Christian, and Justin, I would love to be in your movie. And Chaz, honey, your supposed to block your number before you prankcall your cousin, Bye!"

    Chaz, you are officially king of idiots.He was a boy, what did I expect.
    I pulled my sheets over my head and went back to sleep.


    Chaz's POV:

    Wow cuz, thanks. The guys were laughing. Christian laughed so hard soda came out of his nose.
    "Chaz, you idiot!"
    "Jeez Chaz!" Christian spoke up,"Is our whole summer gonna be this way?"
    "Um, maybe."
    Justin looked at me,"What do you mean MAYBE!"
    "Well, Drew is staying with us over the summer...."
    They.Went.Ballistic.
    "Man Chaz, If you cousin is anything like you our summer is gonna suck!" Ryan snorted
    "Wait!" Justin cut him off,"Maybe she's cool, She is cool right Chaz!?!"
    "Yeah Yeah, she's awesome!"
    "Do you have a picture?" Ryan you are killing me!
    I got them the most recent picture I had of her, at the beach, with her friends.
    "She's the one in the middle, with the brown hair."
    "Dude she's HOT!"
    "Oh man, She's a s'exy beast!"
    "She has nice t'itties!"
    "Ryan gross, Thats my cousin!"
    I Finally got them to stop. We got bored and went on a joy ride in Justin's car.

    sry it so short, comment!
    "Why it gotta be fat, Justin??
    I perfer the term, sexy suculent
    or pleasently plump. Or thin deprived."

    -BeautifulMelodyxx (I Never Thought)

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    i like it keep going


    (all thanks go to Amytoria this is amazing thank u)

    beastly,Do you hold onto forever or let it slip,friends with benefits,im your guardian angel,love dont cost a thing,My love is always for you,my heart is yours,Never back down,Never say never,On the road, purple rain drops on jupiter,Time traveler,True colors,Youll be my baby forever,When summer becomes winter
    Finished:ill love you till the end of time

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    LOL, horndogs! They remind me of my guy friends! Update more, please!

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    I like my story to much to not keep going so.... guess i'll have to keep writing

    Drew's POV
    I got up, grabbed my suitcase, and went down stairs. I kissed my dad goodbye and headed out the door. I got in my car and drove to starbucks. I had a bagel and a Tri-Venti((New size!!!) I needed coffee bad!) Coffee frappachino.

    After I finished my muffin I took my frappachino out to the car and started it. Needing my music, I turned on my radio. Justin Bieber's Sombody to love, OH THE IRONY.

    -Couple hours later-

    I drove up to a big house and parked my car. I walked up the driveway and rang the doorbell. When it opened my Aunt greeted me with a warm hug. I went inside where she led me downstairs. The guys were playing some nascar racing game
    "Chaz, pause the game and come over here and greet you cousin."

    The guys all turned and looked at me. They were smiling and nudging each other.


    Chaz's POV

    We hadn't heard them come in. Drew looke amazing. The guys were staring and drooling, what man w'hores. She was average height, skinny but still with good boobs, and she had long brown hair with side bangs and choppy layers. She had her hair down, I black V neck, and short jean shorts on with grey Vans. I got up to hug her.
    "MMM!''
    "gimme some of that"
    Sounds curtousy of Ryan and Justin.

    "Here," i said" Lets go get your stuff out of the car"

    "I'll help."
    "Me too"
    "Me three"

    This was gonna be a LONG summer.
    Drew-
    Once we got all my S'hit outtta the car we went down stairs to see my room. It, unlike the rest of the house, was small. It only had a closet, couch, coffe table and TV. It. Was. Perfect. I Recognized the table from younger years.

    "Chaz," i said." look our names are still carved into it."
    " I remember that, that was the day we got lost in the woods playing Nights and Princesses."
    "Yeah, and you were the princess."
    A series of giggles exploded from the guys, I laughed a little bit too.
    Once I was unpacked and settled it was still morning. Chaz invited me to the beach with his friends. I GLADLY accepted.
    commentcommentcommentcommentcommentcommentcomment!
    "Why it gotta be fat, Justin??
    I perfer the term, sexy suculent
    or pleasently plump. Or thin deprived."

    -BeautifulMelodyxx (I Never Thought)

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    i like it


    (all thanks go to Amytoria this is amazing thank u)

    beastly,Do you hold onto forever or let it slip,friends with benefits,im your guardian angel,love dont cost a thing,My love is always for you,my heart is yours,Never back down,Never say never,On the road, purple rain drops on jupiter,Time traveler,True colors,Youll be my baby forever,When summer becomes winter
    Finished:ill love you till the end of time

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    I like this story, had me rollin'
    Thank YOU!!
    Thank you, to Just.Ride. For my previous siggy,
    I enjoyed it so much. And thank you AmyToria for this new siggy,
    thank you lol




    Check out my story!!! Thanks AmyToria

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