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    Okay. My first fan fic. Here I go.... :S lol

    It's a long story…

    Chapter 1-

    "mom, what do mean I have to move?" Ashely had teardrops trickling down her face. "darling you have to go, you won't go alone, you have to take your nephew with you. It's only temporarily." Ashely dropped her bags. "mom, but Atlanta. That's miles away
    From us. I'm 17 and you want me to take a 2yr old baby with me. To a different country. Why? Your not explaining!!" she ran upstairs to her room sobbing her heart out. Locking the door behind her, Ashely went into her room and became to tear posters and photos of her wall. She pumped the music outta her stereo loudly and hid under the duvets. A 17yr old was being forced to move to Atlanta with her 2yr old nephew and she didn't know why.

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    well, i quite liked the whole idea. Update soon.

    xx

    Amy <3

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    Thanks. Don't worry. It will get better. Haha.
    Thanks

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    Chapter 2-

    In Atlanta:

    As she stepped outside the airport into fresh air thoughts kept going through her mind. Scared, worried, lost. Ashely felt sick in the stomach. What was she doing? Entering a new place with a baby. It wasn't even hers? "miss Riley, I'm here to pick you up to take you to your hotel. I will be your driver during your stay. Dave at your service" a tall man stood the, fairly old and frail but with a huge grin on his face. Ashely smiled. " well thank you. You could be the nicest thing my moms ever done for me. Oh, which hotel am I staying at?" dave held up a sign. "the queens hotel, rated 7 stars" a huge grim spread across her face. "well, might aswell enjoy this. Come on Dave, put my luggage in the back of the car and let's go." ashely and Alex sat in the car ready to go. Maybe things weren't gonna be that bad.…

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    Chapter 3-

    Sitting in the car Ashelys mood completely transformed. She couldn't be any happier. The thought of leaving home had disappeared. She felt relaxed. For once in her life. Driving along to the hotel Ashely saw an ice cream parlour. "WAIT! let me buy some ice cream. Alex looks like he could use it. I think all of us need it."
    "sure thing" Dave stopped the car and they jumped out the car. "Dave you can wait here, I'll take ale an go pay"
    "thank you madam" Dave grinned.
    Ashely walked in the store and straight up to the counter. Alex walking beside her. "baby, what would you like" Alex pointed to the ice cream and Ashely chose hers.
    "next please" the lady called.
    "oh I would like"… a boy called out along with Ashely. "oh you can go first" he said. "Ashely looked up and turned to face the boy. "omg. Your Justin Bieber?" Justin grinned. "that is my name." he laughed. Ashely gasped. Wasnt this day just getting better?

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    Continuing...
    "I can't believe I'm talking to Justin Bieber" Ashely laughed. She could see Justin peering down at Alex. "that lil boy yours??" Justin said, bending down, talking to Alex. Ashely stuttered "yes".
    "oh really. That's sweet. Um. I forgot To ask, your name? Ashely froze. She just told the most hottest guy on earth she had a baby. Why? She didn't know. She just did it. The nervousness reappeared and she knew that playing that hard to get was bound to catch her up in trouble. What was she doing?? It was too late to re correct the error. He asked for her name. Was she gonna say the truth this time? She wished. "my name is Riley. I mean Miley. I mean…" Justin cut in "nice to meet you Miley. You seem very nice." Justin laughed. What had Ashely just done?

    Sorry it's short. I will update soon

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    OMG i love this
    It seems to be getting more and more interesting
    update?

    Please read my storiees <3


    Surprizes...!!
    All things happen for a reason(a justinbieber love story)


    BELIEBER FOREVER

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    Chapter 4-

    Ashelys pov:
    What was I doing? I couldn't help it. The more we sat and talked the
    More I lied. I didn't know what to say. I couldnt speak the truth. There must be some illness to this? I mean, I can't take it. His eyes… oh how they hypnotize me. All I can think about is giving him the wrong impression and that's what I was doing. This isnt called playing hard to get. This is complete stupidness. Was I falling for him? No. I met him 10minutes ago. But must have some effect on him. I mean, he's still talking to me, well my lies. "Alex is 2? No way. He looks younger." Justin said. His voice. Oh his voice. I replied with a "uhh. Yeah. It sounds bad that I had him at 15 but I'm not that type of girl. It was just a big mistake."
    Why was I still talking. Oh the lies. And he was believing this. God help. Thank god Alex can't
    Talk yet. He'd call me auntie and I be dead. What the hell am
    I doing?

    Justins pov:
    She's so sweet. And real. And so truthful. I have never spent so much time with a normal person who I have never met. But no. She has a baby. And then there's clearly a father. I can't get involved. Miley. That's a sweet name. She looks so innocent, down to earth. But I can't say I have any feelings for her. I met her 10minutes ago. That's crazy. No. Just a friend. Should I ask her to come to that party tonight? Is that to desperate. No. I'm a professional. Stay cool Justin, stay cool. I will talk to her today and probably never see her again. I should leave this. She's not my type anyway. And clearly taken. Justin what are you doing. Stop thinking all this. Just play along.

    Chapter 5-
    After the ice cream incident Ashely walked out, only to have taken justins number. "we are gonna be in so much trouble" Ashely said to Alex as they walked to the car with the ice cream.
    "got me strawberry Ashely?" Dave said. Ashely nodded and quickly got in the far. "long que huh? You were in there for 30minutes max. I was going to come in but I didn't want to rush you."
    "Dave, you should have rushed me. Sorry" Ashely sighed as she buckled her and alex's seatbelt. The car started and they drove off towards the hotel. Ashely felt guilty inside. Using her nephew to get a guy. That was a new kind of low. One she didn't even mean to happen an knew wouldn't work. But she came out with a number. Maybe she could correct herself if Justin ever called. She doubted it but she might aswell wait and see…

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    Thank you hope you like chapter 4 and 5… there's more to come

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    Chapter 6-

    At the hotel:

    Ashely reached to the hotel tensed. She was completely blinded by what she had done. Things were getting worse by the minute. Holding Alex, she walked up to the front desk and got her key to her room. She ignored the elegance of the hotel, all she kept thinking about was him. And the big embarrassing mistake she pulled. That was not cool, to have a baby at 15. Her brother did that, but he was 19. It didn't seem as bad. As she waited in the lift a gush of fear rushed in her body. She turned to look next to her and saw Justin. Things just kept getting worse. It wasn't at all helpful. "hey again, that's such a surprise. Staying in the same hotel?" Justin grinned and took Alex of Ashely. "hello Alex, aren't you cute?" Ashely turned away for a moment and saw Justin cuddling alex through the mirror. The elevator lift felt so long. She felt insecure. They were only on the first floor too. "um. Which floor justin?" Ashely said as she presse number 10 for herself. "oh look, you guessed. Yes I'm 10." Justin said then handing back Alex. Her heart jumped. Same hotel, floor. Not the same
    Room please.


    They arrived on the floor heading to their rooms. Saying goodbye. Justin was room 231 and Ashely was room 232. They were like neighbors. But she wanted to avoid that.

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